Update 17.2: The Burden of Proof


Another proofreading update. All of the wordy story stuff is covered now, leaving just... oh, you know... 600+ pages of formulaic gameplay content.

No big deal.

This'll be the last proofreading update until I finish looking at all of the classes, skills, items, enemies, Labyrinth of Phantasma, and Celestial Road content.

I feel pretty comfortable with where those sections currently are, so I'm not expecting any large-scale translation changes, it just means checking several hundred pages for formulaic gameplay content.

In the case that the Japanese team comes up with lasting gameplay changes while I'm still proofreading, I will push out an update using the older version of the book. If the next update comes and there's only one "Rulebook" file, then that means there weren't any errata or gameplay updates and I finished proofreading and reorganizing the rulebook.

Here's hoping I can pull through and finally have a version of this 742-page PDF that doesn't crash my editing software! It'll be such a godsend when I do finish.

Errata

  • The Sealed ailment previously said it "doesn't heal manually", when the correct wording is "doesn't heal naturally". This was just an error on my part.

Changes

  • Reordered the Setting Details content a little so that both glossaries appear in sequence. The Region Guide has been split into its own section.
  • Gave some sections in the Region Guide a new translation pass.
  • Changed "Gear Forest" (歯車の森) to "Coggewode". The name "Gear Fores" (ギアフォレス) is essentially already a literal translation of this term, and I decided I liked the use of Middle English better for a forest that's supposed to be creepy.
  • The spelling of "Gear Fores" (ギアフォレス) has been changed to "Gear Forest" for consistency with the English maps and for the sake of readability.
  • Adjusted a few mistranslations in the Setting Details, extended the glossary with a few missing terms.
  • Replaced a few instances of "Great Invasions" with Pandemonium for parity with other uses of Pandemonium.
  • Caught a few typos immediately after pushing the 17.1 update, excised them.

Files

Filled With Online (Proofreading Incomplete) 9.2 MB
Aug 08, 2023

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