Update 17.1: What're You Trying to Proof!?


Hey, more changes from proofreading and editing! With that, I've pushed out a new Proofreading PDF. This covers everything up to and including Brigades.

Errata

  • Teratology, Intro (1-5) shouldn't be rewarding players who have World Trader. "Sage's Wisdom" is the only Skill that eliminates incorrect answers.
  • The Great Walls Academy assignment 1-13 was missing the grading text that detailed when players got an A+, passed, or failed. The values are as follows:
    • A+: Defense bonus of 5 or more.
    • Pass: Defense bonus of 3 or more.
    • Fail: Defense bonus of 2 or less.
  • The 10,000 GP compensation from marriage is not tied to becoming widowed, but from voluntary divorce. The text has been shifted around to fix this.
  • The Yggdrasil Cradle's price should be 100,000 GP.
  • There was a Skill missing from Brigades: 
    Crusader’s Bonds
    Active: Support, Check: none, Fatigue: 10, Range: 100, Max: 1, CD: adventure, Requires: Link Stone 2
    A telepathic link delivers your team from evil. All Ailments affecting brigade/party members in range are canceled, and they gain +3 Resistance.

Changes

  • Several of the Magical Cooking menu items have had their flavor text revised so that they read more nicely.
  • While the changes haven't been reflected in the PDF yet, all instances of "SLv" will be changed to "SL" for parity with "CL" (character level, challenge level) and "SR" (skill rating). It also helps that my editing software assumes the capitalization in "SLv" is a mistake and corrects it to "Slv".

Files

Filled With Online (Proofreading Incomplete) 3.1 MB
Aug 06, 2023

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